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Last week we did our descriptive writing about someone special to us I did one about my big brother Dakota. We did our plan on a hamburger plan so we had to put in things you know about them I did introduction, Looks, Likes/ loves and Hobbies. Dakota is a nice big brother. Heres a photo of my descriptive writing.
Reflection:
What did you enjoy?
I enjoyed writing about my brother because he always plays with me.
What did you do well?
I did well making sure that my writing makes sense and miss two lines on a new paragraph.
What could you improve on?
I could improve on working without talking to my friends.
Have you made descriptive writing before?
Kia ora. I am Willow from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you wrote about your big brother. I think that's really nice.
I learnt that your brother likes basketball and rugby.
Maybe you could make all that stuff but make it in a shorter sentence.
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